WWW: Good use of theory. Most points were backed up with it Was put into context (SHEP) Everything refers back to concept of representation - many examples of typical BH representations EBI: Could have linked it with more concepts Spelling/Grammer
High Level 3 WWW: -Sophisticated application of critical debates, current issues about the media and wider contexts. -Answer is supported by a wide range of examples. - Shows detailed evidence of independent study EBI: - FINISHED! - Clearer expressions.
www. theory used very well, applied with further detail.
ebi. some points could be made clearer after use of theory and, i personally think when i read this, that some research and analysis were too jumbled together that made it a little hard to understand.
www: - very good use of supporting evidence. - used many movies as suggestions - with evidence - Has a lot of theory (linked with a movie or context) - context was used very well - historical and political context especially.SHEP. -Good link of theorists - Hall and Monaco
EBI: - some times sentences do not make sense - spelling/grammar. - Maybe more use of contexts - such as social (looking at all aspects) - because it isn't for a specific question - if it was elaborating on movies and linking it back to the question constantly is important.
5 comments:
WWW:
Good use of theory. Most points were backed up with it
Was put into context (SHEP)
Everything refers back to concept of representation - many examples of typical BH representations
EBI:
Could have linked it with more concepts
Spelling/Grammer
L.4
High Level 3
WWW: -Sophisticated application of critical debates, current issues about the media and wider contexts.
-Answer is supported by a wide range of examples.
- Shows detailed evidence of independent study
EBI: - FINISHED!
- Clearer expressions.
www. theory used very well, applied with further detail.
ebi. some points could be made clearer after use of theory and, i personally think when i read this, that some research and analysis were too jumbled together that made it a little hard to understand.
WWW : good reference to films, including contemporary and historical ones
a couple of theorists used which helped back up the statements
EBI : Be a bit clearer sometimes the point is a a bit confusing and randomly placed.
28 marks our of 48 marks
www: - very good use of supporting evidence.
- used many movies as suggestions - with evidence
- Has a lot of theory (linked with a movie or context)
- context was used very well - historical and political context especially.SHEP.
-Good link of theorists - Hall and Monaco
EBI: - some times sentences do not make sense - spelling/grammar.
- Maybe more use of contexts - such as social (looking at all aspects)
- because it isn't for a specific question - if it was elaborating on movies and linking it back to the question constantly is important.
GRADE: Mark 38 - Low level 4
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